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the Ugly Eligatorr by pumpkinbear the Ugly Eligatorr by pumpkinbear
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The Ugly Eligatorr



There was a boy named Ellior
but everyone called him the Ugly Eligatorr.

He’s dandy, clean, and classy…
and his body smells nice of canary.

…but…

why O’ why he had no company?
There’s only one reason: HE’S UGLY!!

He had a big mouth, a pack of big tooth, green thick skin, and a long long tail..
(which no other boys ever had!)
..and that’s why he’s always sad.

His mother died and his father gone!
That’s why he’s living alone!

Ellior O’ Ellior…
His tears fall down the floor!
Ellior O’ Ellior…
All that he need is only amor!

And just like magic..
There’s a new girl in town who never call him a FREAK!

She’s sweet and pretty..
She makes him feel happy!

They spent the day together..
She makes him wish to live forever!

The day goes by..
And he passed it without a cry!
All that she’s done made him fly!
Until one day, the girl dropped by!

They had a chat, a giggle, and laughter..
lunch, and even a candle light dinner!
And when the moon shines, they’re sleeping side by side!
But when the sun goes up, he’s already dead without a skin, nor even a bite!

Ellior O’ Ellior..
The girl you loved wasn’t here anymore!
Ellior O’ Ellior..
She stabs a knife thru your heart and being a part of your tore!

But why O’ why she’s gone, do you know the truth?
The only reason why she’s gone, cos she only wants a pair of new boots!


~fin~



story n art by me!
colored by sunny :iconhideki:
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the Ugly Eligatorr by ~pumpkinbear This is a MUST Fullview! "Its both wonderful and horrible at the same time XD The artist has wonderful digital skills, giving the story a traditional feel. It has a wonderful twist at the end XD I just thought it was plain brilliant. <3" Color collaboration with *Hideki ( Suggested by talliesynn and Featured by Katmomma )
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dark6host Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
Awesome piece, awesome story! thanks for sharing it with us.
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ReversedClock Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my.. he's unbelievably sweet <33
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pumpkinbear Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Professional Artist
:p
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dotagod90 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Professional Photographer
hahahahahahahaha good aligator
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Aeskhari Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice art... but a disservice to women.
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Taepwiirm Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
I wish I could like your comment :), because it's true, sadly...
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Aeskhari Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well thanks. I think...^^;
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Fujii-Chama Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012
LOL... gile, dapet DD luh Wald? hahahah.. keren2.
ceritanyah bagoes. gw sukaaaaa bett...
poetna juga bagus. Tapi kenapa ending ceritalu selalu twisted gituh yah. ku ikud sedih wat si Ellior. bagus sekali tapinyah sihh, jadi gak jadi protes dah gw.. LOL..
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pumpkinbear Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012  Professional Artist
hahahaha!
berhasil dong gw nih.. ;p
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Fujii-Chama Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012
Sanggatss.... Super kerrennn...
saya suka sekali tangan dan otak kakak Rowal.
LOVE LOVE...
*Fangirling mode ON
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