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The Ugly Eligatorr



There was a boy named Ellior
but everyone called him the Ugly Eligatorr.

He’s dandy, clean, and classy…
and his body smells nice of canary.

…but…

why O’ why he had no company?
There’s only one reason: HE’S UGLY!!

He had a big mouth, a pack of big tooth, green thick skin, and a long long tail..
(which no other boys ever had!)
..and that’s why he’s always sad.

His mother died and his father gone!
That’s why he’s living alone!

Ellior O’ Ellior…
His tears fall down the floor!
Ellior O’ Ellior…
All that he need is only amor!

And just like magic..
There’s a new girl in town who never call him a FREAK!

She’s sweet and pretty..
She makes him feel happy!

They spent the day together..
She makes him wish to live forever!

The day goes by..
And he passed it without a cry!
All that she’s done made him fly!
Until one day, the girl dropped by!

They had a chat, a giggle, and laughter..
lunch, and even a candle light dinner!
And when the moon shines, they’re sleeping side by side!
But when the sun goes up, he’s already dead without a skin, nor even a bite!

Ellior O’ Ellior..
The girl you loved wasn’t here anymore!
Ellior O’ Ellior..
She stabs a knife thru your heart and being a part of your tore!

But why O’ why she’s gone, do you know the truth?
The only reason why she’s gone, cos she only wants a pair of new boots!


~fin~



story n art by me!
colored by sunny :iconhideki:
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Given 2009-08-22
the Ugly Eligatorr by ~pumpkinbear This is a MUST Fullview! "Its both wonderful and horrible at the same time XD The artist has wonderful digital skills, giving the story a traditional feel. It has a wonderful twist at the end XD I just thought it was plain brilliant. <3" Color collaboration with *Hideki ( Suggested by talliesynn and Featured by Katmomma )
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dark6host Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
Awesome piece, awesome story! thanks for sharing it with us.
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ReversedClock Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my.. he's unbelievably sweet <33
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:iconpumpkinbear:
pumpkinbear Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Professional Artist
:p
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:icondotagod90:
dotagod90 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Professional Photographer
hahahahahahahaha good aligator
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:iconaeskhari:
Aeskhari Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice art... but a disservice to women.
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:icontaepwiirm:
Taepwiirm Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
I wish I could like your comment :), because it's true, sadly...
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:iconaeskhari:
Aeskhari Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well thanks. I think...^^;
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Fujii-Chama Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012
LOL... gile, dapet DD luh Wald? hahahah.. keren2.
ceritanyah bagoes. gw sukaaaaa bett...
poetna juga bagus. Tapi kenapa ending ceritalu selalu twisted gituh yah. ku ikud sedih wat si Ellior. bagus sekali tapinyah sihh, jadi gak jadi protes dah gw.. LOL..
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pumpkinbear Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012  Professional Artist
hahahaha!
berhasil dong gw nih.. ;p
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:iconfujii-chama:
Fujii-Chama Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012
Sanggatss.... Super kerrennn...
saya suka sekali tangan dan otak kakak Rowal.
LOVE LOVE...
*Fangirling mode ON
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:iconpumpkinbear:
pumpkinbear Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Professional Artist
hoooreee!! gw punya fangirl!! :boogie:
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:iconfujii-chama:
Fujii-Chama Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012
dari dolo juga gw kan fan girl elu waalll.... :giggle:
dari jaman DCS kaleee.... cuman lom parah ajah. sekarang nih baru parah.
awas gw stalk lo wall. heheheh... :blowkiss: :love:
hahahahahaha...
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:iconpumpkinbear:
pumpkinbear Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Professional Artist
hahaha! kalo jadi stalker mah ke sami aja yang gantengan..
ngapain stalk gw? hahahah! :XD:
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Fujii-Chama Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012
gabisa, sami udah punya bini. udah gak bisa dijual lagi. elu ajah.. LOL.. :mwahaha:
lagian, gw kan stalk karya2lu walll...

kyaaaaa... Rowaaaaallllll.... kakaaaaakk...
ajari daku inkiiing...
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pumpkinbear Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Professional Artist
wahaahhaahah!!
mang lo mo jual gw? yang mahal yaaaa! :D

lo mau blajar ink? sini ke IFS banyak yang jago..
ntar diajarin deh!
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Aeromotion Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great story and great artwork!
Poor ellior D:
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Only-enemy Featured By Owner May 18, 2011
This is insanely sad but incredibly wonderful all in one pill. I love the emotion and the fact he makes me feel sorry for him.
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BlueReptileRaptor Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2010
Aww *hugs eligatorr*

This is really cute but sad at the same time. Great work!
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wolfen-graphix Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2010   General Artist
:iconcryforeverplz: woah! Too sad! But great work X)!
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vomitresponse Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh so sad, but oh so great. Poor Ellior.
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flip-venturer Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AARRGGHH....Sedih banget ceritanya kak....
Huhuhuhuhu..... kasian si Ellior. :(

Tapi, top idenya! :D
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tathianna Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2010
sorry I write in spanish!

I was saying that im sad by the poor eligatorr cause the history is so sad.. but your draw its amazing!

kongrats n__n !! :D
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tathianna Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2010
me dio pena k sea tan tristee :(

pobre kokoo

l dibujo es excelente !!
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:iconbocahneraka:
bocahneraka Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2010
hhmmmmmmmmmmmmm....
sempurna!!!!
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Miupoke Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2009  Student General Artist
thats a really sad story... He rather been sad for even longer but not killed by that moron. OR at least died some other way. That doesnt hurt.
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pumpkinbear Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2009  Professional Artist
hahahahaha..
that's life!
sometimes it could turns pure gold into a shit!
sucks, eh? :|
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:iconmiupoke:
Miupoke Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2009  Student General Artist
Yeah. I feel really sorry for that eligator D:
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:iconorangepickles:
OrangePickles Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2009  Student Digital Artist
I feel like tha ALL THE TIME XD except for the girl part, that hasnt happened yet.
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:iconpumpkinbear:
pumpkinbear Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2009  Professional Artist
i hope the girl part never happened to you!
i dont want to see a boots that made by yer skin.. :XD:
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:iconorangepickles:
OrangePickles Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2009  Student Digital Artist
girls don't talk to me, so I think I'm safe...
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MarcWasHere Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2009
Lovely~! Cant believe i havnt stumbled on this earlier. Kudos man.
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:iconpumpkinbear:
pumpkinbear Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2009  Professional Artist
haahahha! :D
thaaanks dude!
batter late than never.. ;p
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:iconpart-time-devil:
part-time-devil Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2009
i'll love you no matter how ugly you get ^o^
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:iconpumpkinbear:
pumpkinbear Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2009  Professional Artist
hahahaha! :XD:
that is so sweet!
thankyoouu.. ;p
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DGAbsinthe Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009
The story is amazing although sad.. I love it :aww:
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:iconpumpkinbear:
pumpkinbear Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2009  Professional Artist
thangkyoou.. ;p
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Pennaz91 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2009
Oh my... I'm touched... This is so sad! That poor gator didn't deserve this cruel end!!! T_T

Talking about art... You're incredible! The gator's expressions are marvellous and make it so cute!! VERY WELL DONE!!
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:iconjojuelo:
JoJuelo Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2009  Student General Artist
I Fuckin' Hate that stinky Bitch!
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:iconnefepants:
Nefepants Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Man, that girl's so heartless. >: (
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:icondev-web-chick:
dev-web-chick Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2009
It's playfully morbid, and made me want to hug an alligator (okay, maybe I shouldn't)
Favorited, however sad the ending may be.
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AeonOfTime Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2009  Professional Interface Designer
Arrrg! This is most devious :tears:
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blackxroseximmortal Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2009
wow. this made me so happy and then all of a sudden BAM. depression. hahahah


very good work! i think this is one of my favorite pieces on deviantart to date. it's like a really twisted children's story. awesome job!
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chef-cheiro Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2009
oh em jiiiii XD gile lama amat
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:icontalking-turtle:
Talking-Turtle Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2009
OMG! LOL I was reading the comic and thinking what a beautiful children's tale it could be ... until the second half. LOL BRILLIANT!!
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:iconblue-backstabber:
Blue-Backstabber Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2009
Oh my god. That is awfully amazing.

This is one children's book I would be willing to buy.
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:icononelonelyday:
OneLonelyDay Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2009
Is it horrible that I'm laughing? Oh, well.
Brilliant!
The illustration is perfect, and I love the smudgy backgrounds.
The story to it is great, I love the twist at the end.
It's morbid, and just great.
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pandoradieter Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2009
Evil Bitch!

but beautiful art!!
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:iconocafi:
Ocafi Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2009   Writer
Aw, poor gator.

Reminds me of those gators on Pearls Before Swine.

I mean that in the best possible way. ^_^
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scullyx101 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2009
this is heartbreaking

in a good way
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konradh8 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2009
awww it's so toutching! I love it!
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